Score: 9

"learned my lesson"

submission: Ghostscape 2 - The Cabin

date: November 4, 2009

from the previous Ghostscape. i played with the sound really low :)

very awesome. i loved the chilling atmosphere of the game. the grainy black and white was like i was playing a classic horror movie.

however, i did find the ending a bit anticlimactic. i won't spoil it for anyone else, but basically left me with a feeling of "meh." still good though. i really love your games!

Score: 3

"i think i already played this"

submission: Fish For Food

date: September 29, 2009

yeah, i did: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /271478

the only difference is that this is in 2D.

the artwork isn't bad. try for something original next time.

Score: 4

"meh"

submission: Swine Flu: Salvation

date: June 14, 2009

your game seems pretty one dimensional. for instance, pigs don't actually have the swine flu, so killing the pigs won't stop the spread of the flu. also, the first cases were from americans visiting mexico, not from mexicans (or mexican pigs, as in your game). plus the game wasn't that engaging. and it also struck me as racist, since the object is to kill invaders crossing the border, which we can read as mexicans, thanks to the clear border and those adorable sombreros you place on the pigs...

Score: 8

"really good but..."

submission: Foreign Creature

date: March 26, 2009

at some parts, it seemed too much like the visitor...i mean, the really big difference is the shape of your respective "heroes." the part with the cat was really...similar, as was the bedroom scene. plus the "foreign creature" goes into a host body--come on. and the title itself even suggests "visitor rip-off." i mean, i get that it's "inspired" by the visitor, but it just looked too similar. i guess my point is that this is an awesome game, but your style is so similar to zeebarf's that for the whole game i thought this was a zeebarf game--which is bad since you lack your own distinctive style.
also, the "movie" parts were lagging...i found myself impatient and would skip them just to get to the next part. they didn't really contribute to the plot. being concise in pauses in the game is key, otherwise players will lose their attention.
i loved that it wasn't over in two seconds, which indicates how much work you put into it, and the artwork is nice. you have a lot of potential in making games, and i can't wait to see you define yourself as an artist.

Score: 3

"i thought mario kills"

submission: Super Mario Eater

date: March 6, 2009

goombas...? not mushrooms. could've sworn he saves the mushrooms.
not really that fun for a game. the premise itself outweighed the actual gameplay

Score: 4

"i have mixed feelings"

submission: Rihanna's Revenge

date: March 6, 2009

i only gave you a score for the artwork which was not bad. however, this game, while seemingly empowering, is just insulting. what it's saying is that violence is justified, which only underscores what hundreds of critics of this situation have been saying to defend brown, which is that maybe she provoked him (and even if he did, there's no excuse for his actions). also, you seem to be making fun of her for reconciling with him with your "true luv" satire at the end of the game, and for that you clearly don't know what it means to be a victim. staying is always easier than leaving when fear is involved. likewise, your inclusion of a link to a domestic abuse website is just condescending. you can't make fun of an abusive relationship by making a game of how you think rihanna should react, and then include a link for help. rectifying violence with more violence, and including a link to stop violence is contradictory and counterproductive.

there. you all got a much needed lecture on violence.

Score: 9

"ah yes..."

submission: Messed-Up Bible Stories 5

date: March 2, 2009

the birth of modern racist stereotypes: all god's fault.
love the animation!

Score: 10

"i woke up this morning"

submission: Narwhals

date: March 2, 2009

and this song was in my head. i have been singing it for days. it's true: narwhals are so awesome. great job!

Score: 10

"oh great"

submission: Fisher Girl

date: February 25, 2009

another addicting (and improved) fishing game. now i will be glued to the computer catching fake fish. thanks a lot.
awesome work

Score: 10

"i give a lot of credit to anyone"

submission: WALL-E & R.O.B.

date: February 24, 2009

that has the patience to use stop-motion animation. great work. very awesome, especially for your first one.